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Sunday, May 8, 2011

Overused Words

 The next time you describe something, try to do it without using these words:

wonderful, beautiful, amazing, delicious, large, big, small, boring, exciting

Don't tell us it was amazing/boring/beautiful/exciting.  Show how it was amazing/boring/beautiful/exciting...

NO: It was amazing.

YES: As I stood high on the rocky cliffs of Dover, I watched the sea's angry waves crash against the shore.
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4 comments:

  1. YL-AMay 8, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    Okay, describing the details is coming right up(perhaps next post)
    -Ati-

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  2. Kathleen MMay 8, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    Wonderful! Ooops.

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  3. YL-BMay 8, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    Next Time,I'll using it ! THX For Your Nice Suggestions ! :)
    -EniX-

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  4. YL-BMay 12, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    Yes, I didn't realized that I made this mistakes of overusing word. I will try my best next time.

    P.2

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