I consider my paragraph about ''Love from parents"is my best writing because it's have a good meaning and very touching. It can change young people ways of thinking negative of their parents from bad to good. It help to reduce family conflicts, help family bonding and gaining trust. It also tell about our parent worries about us. We used to think that things we do are good but it's bad like saying bad is good. This paragraph can useful someday. I wish to put some more emotional words but eh too late
Tep
Tep, so the next step is to revise that piece of writing to make it better, since you know how you need to change it. If you work on it more, then I can publish it with the class magazine. It seems like you have more to say. I would love to read it. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteTep! Why so short, man? Are your ideas dying out or something??
ReplyDeleteMickey
am sick =.=
ReplyDeleteHis everything is short...I mean his writing
ReplyDelete-Ati-
Not everything has to be long but what's important is the meanings inside.
ReplyDelete-rotha