Well this YL15 level is about to end; so fast, isn't it?
We have been doing blog through out the level, but i think there aren't enough because the number of blogs that most of us have written is below ten. Anyway I think my best piece of writing is ' My Favorite Gift ' because it reminds me a lot about my and my best friend's memories, also I've got the most compliments and comments from it. I'll try my best on giving more ideas, details and make the writing structure better. Thanks all to you guys :)
Monineath
Pretty short...not enough information.....not even interesting....sorry if i hurt you but it's true! Would you edit it more in the near future??
ReplyDeleteMickey <3
yeah in the near future... now my head is a bit empty... but hey where's yours? :P
ReplyDeleteMonineath
Mickey, I don't understand your comment. Are you saying this post is too short or the "My favorite gift" is too short? Also, I think the first part of your comment is ok, but saying "it's not even interesting" is not so helpful. Can you say, instead, what it is you wanted to know more about? If I were the writer, I would have no idea what worked or didn't work based on these comments. You also ask her if she's going to edit it, after she just wrote her plans for editing it (it meaning "My favorite gift.")
ReplyDeleteThanks Monineath, I look forward to reading your revision of that piece!
ReplyDeleteYes, it has gone really fast. I feel like we just got started!
urgh...umm.. sorry teacher, i think i don't have anything more to include... i just can't think of any ideas ==' geez
ReplyDeleteMonineath