We've written alot of topics lately, haven't we? But we don't know yet about what any owner favorite subject of all is. So this week blog is about "My Favorite Blog Of All Time" .
Start with me! Well, my favorite subject is, "It's me, Mickey!", my late introduction. I know my writing is not that good, that long, or that meaningful and my grammar is pretty lame; but I did try from the bottom of my tiny heart. Please understand!
The whole reason why I choose this blog?? Hmm, it's that I love to introduce myself to the whole wide world. Just to tell you, it's not like I want to be the center of attention or anything! It's just that people usually look at me in the wrong way. They would look at me,...and say this girl is a gangster, this girl is rude, this girl is cold, this girl is so childish. On the other hand, the girl that they are gossiping about is just trying to be nice also this girl doesn't get along easily with strangers.
Just to recap the information, "It's me, Mickey!" is always the best writing in my heart because it contain what is me in its' meaning. And also,
P.S: I wrote it from my heart, please understand it even if it's not that long.
P.S.S: Please help to notify any mistake(s) I've made in my paragraph.
Thank you for your reading, your enjoyment AND your thinking!
Mickey
Hmmm, I thought I commented on this before but it's gone... Anyway, first I want to make sure you understand the assignment. I wanted you to rewrite a piece of writing to make it better, so I can publish it in the class booklet. This post talks about your post, but it doesn't rewrite it, exactly... So I'm not sure what to do.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to see you take some of these ideas and add them to your original post. If you combine some of both, I think you can have a really great post to put in the booklet! Does this make sense?
Also, I think you give us tiny bits of information about yourself, and it just makes me want to know a little bit more. You tell us a lot about who you are NOT - but who are you, really? :) You often say really interesting things, but don't go into depth. It leaves me curious...
Here's what you DO say: you want people to see you for who you are, you're a tomboy, you like to be funny and heartwarming, and you wish you spent more time with your parents.
Here are more questions: What do you mean about daydreaming? What do you dream about? What do you like to do? What is important to you?
Thanks Mickey... I hope you'll work on the post, and let me know when it's ready to be published!
I enjoy your writing - it's not boring!
Kathleen
p.s. instead of apologizing for the "lame grammar," how about working on it a little? :)
sorry teacher but i did try my best, but i think i did rewrite that post a little more
ReplyDeleteMickey <3
Mickey, I see your changes to the other post. Thanks for doing that. Still, the grammar needs work before I can publish it. I need to see you make an effort to do that part of it. If you really want people to appreciate you and know you more, don't you want your writing in that post to be as clear as possible?
ReplyDeleteAlso, you got a lot of feedback about the "stupid" part. What do you think about that?