There was a man named was Bob Ho ( Jackie chan). He was a chinese spy. He wanted to retired and decided to live next door near his girlfriend (Amber Valletta) house. When his girlfriend ( Gillian) wanted to visit her father in a hospital. Bob was gonna be a babysitter in her house and look after her children. But they were very rude. They didn't want Bob to be there father. Ian ( Will Shadley) download his secret thing in his computer. What was Bob going to do next with the rude children and Russian terrorists ? He needed helps with his spy partners.In the end Russian terrorists went into Gillian's house, Bob wanted to protect them. So they tried to find good ways to killed them together. The story took place in the United States.
Sreylen
Sreylen
Sreylen, thanks for using your own words in the synopsis. It sounds like a comedy - is it? Is it your favorite movie or just one you like? I didn't understand what the "secret thing" was. Russian terrorists? How did they get involved??
ReplyDeleteIn your writing, think about how to tell the story clearly, but also get people excited about learning more. Maybe a more interesting first sentence would help draw people in.
Thanks for your persistence.
-Kathleen
Don't you think it's a little too short?
ReplyDeleteMickey
yours not that long too
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