Ding Ding Ding!!!the school bell was ring.After I heard that,I knew it was the time to go back home.So walked back home slowly & alone.I opened the door.Woof woof,sound from my little dog barked.I smiled and got into the house.I went into the kitchen and "Dook dook"!!!I drank 2 glasses of water while I was looking around my house so I knew that no one here beside me and my little dog."Where are everybody?"I asked myself.Finally I went to my bedroom and took the bath.Then I called to my dad and asked him where he was.He said he couldn't comeback home today.So I had dinner alone.After that I decide to went to the bed early.Tok tok tok...I heard the footsteps in front of my room.Knock!I waked up and looked around my room but everything is silent.Knock!!!Someone was knocking my door gain.I got out of my bed and opened the door.Surprise!My parent were stand in front of me.They clapped their hands and said "Happy Birthday To You,My little girl" "Ahh!!!"I shouted loudly "Today is my birthday.How did I forget it???".They looked at me and hit my head."Ouch"I shouted"It's hurt"."Ha ha ha...my little daughter"they laughed.Click click!sound came from my dad's camera.We took a lot of photos.It was a happy day."Maybe I could sleep well tonight"I thought.He he he :)
Visal
Visal
Funny and sweet post, Visal!
ReplyDeleteI thought the "dook dook" of drinking water was a funny onomatopoeic word.
Try breaking into paragraphs. Check your past tenses.
Liked the ending! It made me smile.
yeah...thanks teacher:)
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