"Spring is a joyful season of flowers. Spring is unique and never repeating like a flow time. "
It was a beautiful sunny morning. The sun was shining brightly on the blue sky. The flowers which my family and I lovingly planted, have already bloomed. It was the time when spring had come again.
The sward was surrounded by the pretty green grass. The whole garden was fulfilled with bushes of colorful flowers such as roses, daisy, marigold, tulip and crocus. Moreover, there were also a few of cherry blossom trees, which bloomed with charming pink and white blossom. Swarms of bees rushed at them. They hummed round the opening buds. They hummed round the blooming petals.They looted the essence of flowers and made honey of it. Butterflies, too, gone to the flowers and sit on them. They flew here and there about the flowers. Flowers of various colors danced in the vernal wind. It carried to us smell of flowers and music of soils.
Roath,
ReplyDeleteyou have some really nice, unique phrases here. I like that you are experimenting with combining senses, like "the music of soils." I enjoyed "Swarms of bees rushed at them. They hummed round the opening buds....They looted the essence of flowers and ma(d)e honey of it."Very poetic. How did you come up with that?!
A few minor things - can it be cloudy and sunny/endless blue sky at the same time? Flied? I had never heard the word "sward" before, I had to look it up. Not very common! I wonder if you like to read novels from the 1800's?! Jane Austen?
Thanks teacher,
ReplyDeleteI've read short epistolary novel of Jane Austen. It called 'Lady Susan'. I haven't read any others, i'll be happy if i get a chance to read all of her novels.
This is a well written description, Roath. I love gardens and enjoyed your word painting.
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Hi.I am in yl10. I like your writing very much. I like that your descriptions are very interesting.
ReplyDeleteI want Cambodia to have this reason because I'm the person who like the flower and air. I like you say that the spring day has a lot of natural things and I like the music of soids.
I have one garden at my house and you?
For this sentence ''The whole garden was fulfilled with bushes of colorful flowers such as roses, daisy, marigold, tulip and crocus''. So you mean that there is only one daisy? Marigold?...
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