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Australian Center for Education (ACE)
Phnom Penh, Cambodia

Thursday, May 26, 2011

The life of the grim reaper


It was a peaceful day.... the birds were chirping, the sun was shining when Billy bursted into the house. Crash! And the front door was knock down. "When are you going to do something normal child?"Grim said. Then Billy ran around the house screaming like a crazy baboon "eek eek aak akk. " Grim got angry and grabbed his scythe and zapped Billy turning him into a hideous creature.
Then he went to the living to watch his favorite show. When he sat down on the couch, a loud fart was heard. Billy! Grim thought. With that flame burned from his eyes and Billy turned into a flying fried chicken."There that should do it."He began to watch his favorite show when Mandy interrupted."What are you watching grim?"Mandy said. "It's favorite show because it's got drama and comedy so it's dramady. Also it's got fun and art so it's dramady fart."""Beep beep", Mandy looked at her watch and remembered something. "Grim! I told you we are having my hair trimmed today since last week!" Grim wasn't in the mood to miss his show so he swung his scythe and "chving" and most of Mandy's hair fell to the ground with a thump. Suddenly, out of the blue, they heard a screech then a loud crash, it was Harold, Billy's father again coming from work. He picked his nose and pulled out his brain and ate it wit a big long slurp. " Herm just a typical day of my life"Grim said.

P.s this is fictional and I don't own the show but I got some ideas from the show and it's a bit short because I couldn't think of anything else :P
Rotha

5 comments:

  1. I love Mandy.
    What is the meaning of SMILE?

    Mickey

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  2. Billy's kinda annoying ><''

    Monineath

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  3. Hi Rotha. Well, the main point was to use a lot of onomatopoeic words, which you did. Eek eek aak akk! You used a lot of really great ones. "Chving" is a new one :) I know just the sound you mean.

    I hope you didn't copy any actual wording from the show, though.? Is "dramady" your idea? I like it.

    The "slurp" when he ate his brain was positively repulsive!

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  4. I enjoyed it. Sometimes, taking something everybody know to write it in your own word is great. But it is not always. I think it is a little bit complicated. Anyway, good job.

    P.2

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  5. actually' chving is the sound of grim using his scythe to slice mandy's hair and btw, I like mandy and how she can control others easily
    -rotha

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