Object, it means thing, right? Everyone has their own favorite objects but it just not only one. I also have many favorite objects; and like kids these days technology and stuffed animals are very popular, for example: mobile phone, laptop, teddy bear, or cars. But myself, I love to take photographs! I want to be a photographer! So, you can guess, right? I love my camera!
Of course, a camera is very expensive but it doesn't mean I'm showing off. For a person who loves photography, it means a whole world. I love its color, black, like a black diamond, whenever I look at it. It must be hung around my neck whenever I go on a trip. This way I will be able to take the beautiful moments of my life just in time or sometime even just the beautiful scenes that I think are so rare or beautiful.
I don't know how to describe to you more! I mean, if you don't love cameras as much as I do, then it would just mean nothing for me to over describe it. Even though, I just want to say, a photograph is the only thing to pause time and bring back a beautiful memory.
P.S: mistakes my paragraph and tell me!!
P.S.S: tell me what YOU think
well am i one of your beautiful memories? lolzz...:D
ReplyDeleteanyway to be serious i love this sentence << photograph is the only thing to paused time and bring back the beautiful memory. >> :)
geez! i forgot to put my name again... Monineath :)
ReplyDeleteHi Mickey,
ReplyDeleteglad we worked on the grammar! It's clear and I enjoyed reading it. I like how you used a question here: "So, you can guess, right? I love my camera!" It was a nice transition.
I disagree that it wouldn't mean anything to me to have you describe it more. I think it would be interesting to know how it feels (is it heavy? smooth?) How complicated is it (does it have lots of settings and buttons and do you know how to use these, or do you just put it on automatic and shoot?). And what started your interest in photography? What do you like to take pictures of? Is this your first camera? Do you remember the day you received it? Was it a gift?
:) So you can see I really would be interested in more!
I really liked the 2nd paragraph.
Thanks for sharing your favorite thing!
p.s. I don't know what "mistakes my paragraph" means in your p.s. So I'm telling you.
ReplyDeleteOhh Mickey ! I like taking photos also. But of things instead of myself. that's why you have tonnes of pictures on Facebook.
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Ow, Mickey. That is awesome. I love that way you used questions. I can feel it and it is what writing is all about. Interestingly, witty. Great paragraph parting.
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@Monineath: yes my friend
ReplyDelete@Enix: I don't post picture that i took of picture; because then people on facebook will find it boring.
@P.2: thanks
@Teacher: i just wanted everyone to track my mistake(s)
I like taking photos also but there's not much to take in my house
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