It is still here near my chair in ACE and Sisowat high school. I’ve taken it on every trip with my family or friends. I’ve have it since I was in grade 1 until now. It is my backpack. I use it for everything to keep books, put clothes in, studying equipment, pictures, mechanical equipment to. It is very useful because if my bicycle wheel got flat I go buy a new wheel and remove the old one by my self. If my clothes of dirtier I always have a spare shirt and pants if I go play sports with my friends. I also carry a soap and shampoo if I’m not at home or somewhere in the city when I’m out with my friends. It have been with me for a long time it look very dirty too well not very dirty but old looking. It’s not much to look at. But it is the most useful thing to be with.
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Nice, and very amazing!! How can you keep it in ONE piece?! And if you have it for that long, does it have a memory behind it?
ReplyDeleteMickey
yes but i started to keep equipments when i started grade 7
ReplyDeleteI get very attached to my backpacks too! I finally stopped using one I had for many years but I sort of miss it. I like how you describe all the different uses you have for it. Some really nice details about that! I can imagine you carrying all these different things and how much use you get out of it.
ReplyDeleteGrammar - keep working on this!
Look at this sentence:
"It have been with me for a long time it look very dirty too well not very dirty but old looking."
How could you shorten this and change it so it is not a run-on sentence? I think you could even shorten this to a few words and combine it with the next sentence.
be with = "own" or "have" might be more appropriate.
Your writing is showing improvement. This post is your strongest so far. Thanks, I enjoyed reading it!
p.s. Like Mickey, I wonder if there are memories to share...