What do you do whenever the word BORED comes to your mind? What do you often do to erase it from your brain? Well, whatever you do just don't bang your head against the wall! That leads me of telling you my special object! Wait for it wait for it...My flat-screen television ! It always magnetize the others to gaze at it like a national treasure!Anyway, my magic box has a night-black color which would instantly hidden from plain sight during the night. I guess it's quite a time since my uncle bought it for me since my birthday half a year ago. Still, it's always be a stress reliever to everyone who watch it!
Ati
Hi Ati, I like how you begin with a question. (It didn't make me think of TV though, cause that's not what I usually do when I'm bored. But it's probably true for a lot of people!)
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure why you tell us to "wait for it," but yes, I did wait, at least until the end of the sentence! :)
suggestions:
bang your head AGAINST the wall
stress (no -ed) reliever
Magnetizes, gaze = great verbs!
I think this is a lively beginning to something more... like Nissa's post, I wanted to see more of your personality come through the description. I wanted to learn a bit more about you through your favorite thing. Maybe WHAT you watch on the tv could give us a clue... and when/why you get bored. Do you sit for hours, eating candy, watching National Geographic, or do you watch Karate Kid over and over again? :)
Haha! Thanks Teacher! But don't you think the writing is short?
ReplyDelete-Ati-
Yes, it's short! That's why I wrote the questions at the end of my comment. Want to know more...
ReplyDeleteWhen I'm bored??...Hmmm, I sleep :D
ReplyDeleteMickey