My favorite object is my purple pencil. Why do I like it? Because of the color I like purple and when I am writing something or the teacher give assignments for me to write I always use this pencil . It makes me comfortable , relax happy when I use it. It helps my writing to look good. I bought it for 2 years but it is still strong and new . Some people say that things that made in Japan was strong and look great. The pencil that I use is made in Japan. That is why It is strong I do not know. Some days I would like to buy it more. If there is still has at Store. I am going to buy pink purple yellow white ...etc. Before I did not know it was good my mother told me to buy it but i refused but on my birthday she went to buy it for me. When I use this pencil it reminds me that it was my mother's present. I forget one thing is that it is an automatic pencil. I forgot the price but perhaps it was 4 or 5 dollars.
Sreylen
That's about the color you like! And the only reason you keep using it is because it's still useful!!
ReplyDeleteMickey
Sreylen,
ReplyDeleteMy favorite pens are purple! I have a few of them. So much better than blue or black :)
I like that you tell how it makes you feel to use it and that it helps your writing to look good. I thought it was kind of funny that you didn't want it at first so your mom bought it for you, and now it's your favorite.
Suggestions - edit for grammar. Try these two parts:
"That is why It is strong I do not know."
You need to change the order of this sentence. Could you make it a question?
"If there is still has at Store. I am going to buy pink purple yellow white ...etc"
If there is still has.... hmmm. Do you see the problem? Also, can you combine these two sentences, and leave out the word "etc."?
Thanks for two posts and for remembering to use a question in your writing! I'll have to look for pencils from Japan :)
4 or 5 dollars? Quite expensive. But anyway if is it useful,there is no matter how expensive it is.
ReplyDeleteGreat Post ! ^^
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